Thursday, March 17, 2011

Blog Entry 4 The "Hype"

            In "Hype," Lasn shows us how ads are surrounding people's lives whether they like it or not. Every day when you wake up, you can see and hear them whether you are at home or in the public. You can't escape from Ads because you have no where to hide. Ads are following you everywhere and get into you mind without you noticing. I agree with the author when she states that "advertisements are the most prevalent and toxic of the mental pollutants" and "no one is exempt and no one will be spared."
             Ads are one of the most popular roles played in our society. The reason that ads steadily increase and spread is because this is a business strategy that attract people. When people used to see and hear them everyday, more and more they will get into their minds without noticing. There are many kinds of brand name products in the market and people want to own them because of the ads attraction. When I first came to America in 90', ads were pretty new to me and there were not as many as today. Since ads go into my life and influencer me a lot, sometimes I can't get rid of them. I have many unnecessary products at home because of the pursuit of the ads. I can't believe I have so many things filled in my apartment compared to when I first arrived to America with two suitcases. Many of my friends also said that their apartments have become smaller and smaller because of the stuff. We used to buy things without thinking because we just want to update ourselves by the style of the ads. As a result, we can see how ads are so "prevalent" and can influence our mind just like "toxic of the mental pollutants" in our lives.
             Since ads today have become the tool of the companies' competition, we can't avoid seeing ads no matter where we stand. According to the article, it is "estimated 12 billion display ads, 3million radio commercials, and more than 200,000 TV commercials" are shown every day in North America. I believe that the number is much higher today because of the networking. Everywhere you go, even in the wheat fields or in you kids' classroom, the ads are always right in front of your eyes. We can always see how companies give away so many small free package with ads, even small pencils for kids that has ads too. This is a good reason to show us that "no one is exempt" from ads. At the end, the author says sarcastically that in the silent moments, she hears "that kid singing the Oscar Meyer wiener song" ad, instead of "Beethoven's Ninth Symphony."
             It is for sure there are too many ads for us. Since we can't get rid of ads, we should make decision on our own instead of what the ads want us to be.
             

1 comment:

  1. 1. Overall, what is the author doing well? (It is always good to start off with a strong point).
    The author did well by giving good examples and by giving the readers something to agree upon by thinking about their daily lives.
    2. Is the essay around 400 words?
    Yes the essay is around 400 words and she explained herself in details and facts.
    3. Does the author (your team mate) have a clear claim? What is it?
    Yes she has a clear claim but she didnt explain it and her claim is that she agrees with the author that advertisements cant be escaped.
    4. Does the author have a clear introduction? How could it be improved?
    Yes she has a clear introduction and she explains herself very well about what she is going to talk about but she could improve it by writing a little more on what shes going to to explain.
    5. Does the author summarize the reading completely and clearly? Why or why not?
    She explain up to a point where i understand but i wish she would put more effort in giving other information about the article
    6. Does the author respond to the reading with specific examples from real life?
    Yes because she wrote that she couldn't get rid of the advertisements either and all she saw was advertisements.
    7. Is the writing clear and easy to read? What patterns of errors do you see that need to be addressed in the future?
    The reading is clear and precise and get tot the point right away. She should put more personal real life experiences in her essay.

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